Question

假定你是李华，请代表校实践部写一封邮件告知你校交换生Chris，你们将组织一次校外劳动锻炼，内容包括：

1. 活动目的：

2. 活动安排：

3. 表达期待。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

参考词汇：实践部 the Practice Department

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Answer

Dear Chris,

I'm Li Hua. On behalf of the Practice Department of our school, I'm writing to tell you about an unpaid labour activity outside the school.

Nowadays, as many students lack labour awareness, the activity is intended to fuel our passion for manual work and highlight its importance. This Saturday, after gathering at the school gate at 8:00 am. we'll take a school bus to a nearby farm to work there. To be exact, our task will involve weeding, watering, applying fertilizers, and spraying pesticides. Nothing is easily produced, right? Hopefully, this experience will remind us to treasure what we have and help us to develop a sense of responsibility.

Are you interested? Just tell me in advance. Looking forward to your participation!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，告知交换生学校组织的一次校外劳动锻炼活动的具体内容。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 活动目的

2. 活动安排

3. 表达期待

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

the Practice Department；on behalf of；labour；activity；be aware of；importance；gather；remind；sense of responsibility

第三步：连词成句

1. On behalf of the Practice Department of our school, I'm writing to tell you about a labour activity on this weekend.

2. We students are lack of physical labour nowadays.

3. Through this activity, we’ll be aware of the importance of manual work.

4. It will also help to develop a sense of responsibility.

5. This Sunday, we must gather at the school gate at 8:00 am, then we'll walk to a nearby factory to work there.

6. Tell me if you are interested in it. Looking forward to your participation.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改